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Poetry 101
Ok, I am officially blown away. Though I have read all your work I will only comment on this one poem. You are a very gifted and talented man whose light obviously has been sheltered under the proverbial bushel this whole while. Within your work I can sense your pain, I can sense your despair.. I also can feel the love that you are expressing and are in need of accepting. Your poetry makes the reader experience all that you have experienced or are experiencing at that moment. Your poems make a person however jaded believe in the possibility of love and the acceptance of a lover. Your poems also express the darkness that lingers within us all. The darkness that lurks in the foremost recesses of our hearts and minds. The darkness that makes us question our sanity, our reason for existing and why we continue to allow our lungs to breath and our heart to beat.
Do not ever give up on your dreams for you have a gift that must be shared with the rest of the world. It may not be now or even in a little while but I believe with the integrity and passion that your work shows that you will indeed be a force to recognized.
Do not ever give up on your dreams for you have a gift that must be shared with the rest of the world. It may not be now or even in a little while but I believe with the integrity and passion that your work shows that you will indeed be a force to recognized.
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